Continuation of my MICHAEL JACKSON story? please read!?

"ding dong"... "ding dong"... Please answer! The huge oak door creaks open slowly and there stands the most beautiful man I hav...



"ding dong"…
"ding dong"…
Please answer!
The huge oak door creaks open slowly and there stands the most beautiful man I have ever seen, the man that graces every one of my dreams. The man I would sell my soul for.
He flashes a mouth full of perfect white teeth. His aviator lenses glint in the harsh sunlight. He holds out a sparkly gloved hand. THE sparkly gloved hand.
"Hi, I’m Michael. I’ve been expecting you" Such a simple sentence. But one that makes my heart beat uncontrollably.
I curse myself for hesitating to grab his hand. Maybe it is the huge snake, tenderly known as Muscles, coiled around his body. Or maybe it’s the fact that my palms are getting increasingly sweatier by the second.
Deep breaths. Take deep breaths I tell myself.
"Hello. Michael. I’m Lauren."
The next thing I remember is waking up on a comfy red couch. Mannequins of all shapes and sizes are hovering over me. I immediately sit up and inspect my surroundings. Oh my God, could this be reality? Am I really inside of his house? And if this is a dream, please don’t wake me up!
A shadow appears over me and I look up. That same beautiful angelic smile is staring back at me.
"Oh! Michael, I’m so so sorry. I don’t know what happened. I’m…"
His laugh interjects my blubbering. It is the single most beautiful laugh I have ever heard. I can’t help myself; a huge smile spreads across my face.
"It’s ok. Really. Don’t worry about it. I’m kind of used to it," He says playfully. "Wanna go see the Ranch?"
"Of course!” I respond a little too quickly and a little too loudly. He giggles, but stoically composes himself. He takes my hand, and we start towards the door.
Minutes later we are racing go-carts around the winding track, taking no prisoners. Funny, I never expected my idol to be so competitive! He swerves in front of my cart. He screams, so innocent and child-like, and speeds away. I laugh to myself and press my pedal to the floor in an attempt to catch up with him. I don’t want him to be out of my sight. After about 20 minutes of racing, I see his cart come to a stop on the side. I pull over next to him. A slim but toned arm hangs out of the window. His fingers curl, beckoning me to come closer. I was out of my cart in 2 seconds flat. I made my way over to his window, as unsteady as a drunk. Ha, this man IS pretty intoxicating I think to myself. Leaning into the window I smell a sweet woodsy odor. He even smells amazing!? Oh Lord, please do not let me faint again.
“What do you want?” I question sarcastically, pushing him ever so lightly.
He flashes that heart melting smile and steps out of the cart. Before I know it my Roxy flip flops are lifted off of the go-cart track. He is carrying me, heaven only knows where. But I’m not complaining. His breathing is pretty even but I am so worried that I am too heavy for him. He’s muscular, but still so thin! After about 30 seconds of worrying I decide to close my eyes and savor the moment. I feel his heartbeat and it is the best feeling I have ever experienced. Michael then flops me onto the grass beside a giant Ferris wheel. I lie on my back and smile up at him. He kneels over my prostrate body holding my arms hostage above my head. My heart must be about to beat out of my chest! I know that he can hear it!
“Don’t move a muscle,” he whispers.
“Your wish is my command,” I manage to say.

… To be continued.

STAR IF YOU WANT ME TO CONTINUE :)
What do you guys think??

20 Responses to “Continuation of my MICHAEL JACKSON story? please read!?”

  1. Stranger in Canada™ says:

    Beautiful the story will make Michael smile in heaven. Oh I wish he is. Just beautiful!!!

  2. yes rebecka♥michael jackson says:

    wow..i thought that was good:)

  3. ♫You Rock My World♫ says:

    greatt!!! ☺ continue it please..!

  4. ~Miss Kayla~ R.I.P. MJ <3 says:

    Oh my goodness….

    Make a freakin’ book..!!
    xD

  5. Meggie Loves Michael J. says:

    Oh, my God.
    Love it.
    The offer to help still stands…. I would love to get my hands on this story.

  6. MJ is Kewl says:

    PLEASE continue!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love this story

  7. A angel got his wings R.I.P MJ says:

    if you don’t mind..I’m pretending i’m you XD You should make a story of him being sick and you taking care of him!!! but plzzz plzzz plzzz post more of the story or ill die!!!

  8. Dyme <3 MICHAEL Jackson lol says:

    HEY! i cant read this until i read the first one! can u give me a link.

  9. kitkat says:

    continue!

  10. r.i.p mj im speechless says:

    Oh Please Keep On Going This One Of The Greatest Story I Have Ever Heard.Sorry If I’m Over-Liking This Story But Its Really Good.You Should Make A Book Lol.I Bet If You Do Their Would Be Millions Of People Jealous Of You.I Like The Way You Put So Much Detail.You Sure Did Notice His Wonderful Smile.But Please Keep On Going.One Of The Greatest Ever.= )

    And By The Way 6 Stars

    I Love You Michael
    The King Of Pop Forever
    1958-2009

  11. WISE☼RAD says:

    woah.that was really cute.sounds like a love story almost

  12. Always in my ♥ says:

    Continue! lol get writting! :)

  13. K-Bone says:

    Awsome! Please continue!

  14. Annie's Not Ok says:

    Omg I love this, please make it into a book or something(and then give us all free copies lol)!

    I like it even more especially since my names Lauren too hahaha (it’s just spelt with a Y instead of an E)

  15. Remember The Time♥ RIP MJ says:

    DANYUM!

    Please write MORE!

    Please!

    P.S im from V.A too!

    that was really awesome..
    will you give me a free copy when you become famous lol?

  16. Hannah ♥s MJ says:

    CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE

    sorry i am also imagining it to be me tehe

  17. cherry babe says:

    !wow!!!

  18. Smooth Criminal. says:

    That’s really good.
    You’re really talented.

  19. KeepTheFaith♥ says:

    is this gonna turn into some gross porno ?
    just kidding.

    CONTINUE ! MAKE A BOOK !

    <3

  20. I ♥ PMJ says:

    O. MY. GOSH. You HAVE to continue it!

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